Is my short paragraph sounds natural in English?!!
Everything starts from that night! I thought it’s a typical day. My boyfriend dumped me, and I was standing in the street, crying and begging him not to leave me. He was right! It's hard, to date a girl like me! I knew he would talk about break up sooner or later. But I couldn’t stop crying because I was left behind again. I didn’t want to be alone. It was my normal life. I’m a dangerous human. People just come to pity me then leave me behind.
“I’m sorry Anna. I thought your curse is not momentous to me. But I can't take it anymore. We do not match each other.”
He left without looking back. Rain has started and I had no umbrella so I had just gotten back home all wet. I had no idea that the next few seconds would change my life forever. I was thinking about taking a shower and sleep. I opened the front door. My mind was so tired. I couldn’t believe the thing I see with my own eyes. There was a boy standing in the living-room! Well kind of boy, kind of cat
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Everything started that night. I thought it was a typical day. My boyfriend just dumped me, and I was standing in the street, crying and begging him not to leave me. He was right! It's hard, to date a girl like me. I knew he would talk about breaking up sooner or later. But I couldn’t stop crying because I was left behind again. I didn’t want to be alone. But such is my life. I’m a dangerous human. People just come to pity me then leave me behind.
“I’m sorry Anna. I thought your curse was not important to me. But I can't take it anymore. We do not match each other.”
He left without looking back. It started to rain, and I had no umbrella. I arrived home soaking wet. I had no idea that the next few seconds would change my life forever. I was thinking about taking a shower and sleeping. I opened the front door. My mind was so tired. I couldn’t believe the thing I saw with my own eyes. There was a boy standing in the living-room! Well, he was kind of a boy, kind of a cat.
This sounds like a really interesting story! It would be great to read more of it! In terms of grammatical mistakes, the main thing to help your writing is to make sure that the verb tenses match throughout. You used both present and past tense, so I just changed it all to past tense. If you'd rather choose present, then you can do that instead. Please feel free to message me with any other questions.
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