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could someone rephrase this sentence for me to make it more authentic? thanks~ The history of cooperation and communication among BRICS countries can be also considered as a history of cultural exchange, leading to the communication and integration between different cultures.

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It sounds pretty good to me. I can think of two changes I'd make to it. To be honest, however, I don't know if the two changes are right. :) "The history of cooperation and communication among BRICS countries can also be considered a history of cultural exchange, leading to communication and integration between different cultures." I switched around "also" and "be" and removed "as" between "considered" and "a". To me that sounds more natural, though, as I've said, I'm not 100% sure that it's grammatically correct. EDIT: Upon re-reading it, I thought it sounded slightly better by removing the "the" before "communication and integration".
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The history of cooperation and communication between the BRICS countries can just as well be considered as that of a cultural exchange, leading to a higher level of their integration, independent of cultural differences.
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Don't think it need rephrasing, it's authentic alright.

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