This would be better as a notebook entry. There's a bit to fix. I found it a little confusing though. You talk about being a teacher, then about not knowing what you want to be. You talk about graduating from both High School and University, but don't really link those two ideas together very well. Your use of 'now' after 'details' is ambiguous. Do you mean 'currently', or are you using it as a conjunction? The odd line breaks make it a little hard to read. Perhaps think about these points, revise it, and rewrite it as a notebook entry for people to correct?