Would you please make it Academic?!
At present succeeding in organizational change management is of great importance for organizations and how to achieve this success at times of economic crises is what many of them aspire. Change can be best managed when it is programmed, organized, directed and controlled; Also success in making changes requires an effective leadership. Experience has shown that most of change plans face failure. So, researchers seek to recognize common success factors of change management. Change management capability is a nuclear organizational competence. As Lynn Crawford points out, to succeed in applying organizational change the person in charge of change manager or project/program manager must have several capabilities. Change management institution introduced the change management experts’ competency model last year which is a standard for authenticating change manager’s program and evaluates the manager’s capability with regard to specified behaviors in the model.

Thanks in advance.

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Would you please make it Academic?!
At present succeeding in organizational change management is of great importance for organizations and how to achieve this success at times of economic crises is what many of them aspire. Change can be best managed when it is programmed, organized, directed and controlled; Also success in making changes requires an effective leadership. Experience has shown that most of change plans face failure. So, researchers seek to recognize common success factors of change management. Change management capability is a nuclear organizational competence. As Lynn Crawford points out, to succeed in applying organizational change the person in charge of change manager or project/program manager must have several capabilities. Change management institution introduced the change management experts’ competency model last year which is a standard for authenticating change manager’s program and evaluates the manager’s capability with regard to specified behaviors in the model.

Thanks in advance.

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Hi Riza,

It's better to post it in "Notebook", because this "Answers" section isn't designed for text corrections.

In general, you seem to have the academic vocabulary, so you need to look at the grammar again.

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Thank you, but is the text above academic enough to post to a journal?

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I have studied change management and read some of Lynn Crawford's work so I am familiar with the concepts. In addition to grammar, ensure that you are citing Crawford's work correctly as well as stating the ideas as simply as possible.

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