Can you help me to correct this sentence, please?
"She flies to the Apricitytale, wishing to get a little piece of a winter. But when she opens her eyes, she finds herself in a kingdom that called The Kingdom of Butterflies".

#Thanks before.

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Can you help me to correct this sentence, please?
"She flies to the Apricitytale, wishing to get a little piece of a winter. But when she opens her eyes, she finds herself in a kingdom that called The Kingdom of Butterflies".

#Thanks before.

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I think you are making reference to "The Apricity Tale".. However..if you are using this as the main place name in your sentence then I would correct it as..

She flies to the Apricity tale, hoping to experience a little piece of a winter. When she opens her eyes, she finds herself in a kingdom that is called 'The Kingdom of Butterfly'.

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