could someone revise this sentence for me? thanks a lot~
He has decided to locate the production site at Zhuxi Country, which on one hand, gave consideration to the high quality of local water source, one the other hand, to his affection(or feeling) built through his long investment in Hubei Province and his responsibility to give back to local community.

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could someone revise this sentence for me? thanks a lot~
He has decided to locate the production site at Zhuxi Country, which on one hand, gave consideration to the high quality of local water source, one the other hand, to his affection(or feeling)  built through his long investment in Hubei Province and his responsibility to give back to local community.

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He has decided to locate the production site at Zhuxi Country, giving consideration on one hand to the high quality of the local water source, and on the other, to his affection for Hubei Province built through his long investment there, and his responsibility to give back to the local community.

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