could someone revise this sentence for me? thanks a lot~ The Group has started its industrial investment in Hubei province since 2005, which has greatly contributed to increase local tax revenues and

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could someone revise this sentence for me? thanks a lot~ The Group has started its industrial investment in Hubei province since 2005, which has greatly contributed to increase local tax revenues and provide employment.

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The Group started its industrial investment in Hubei province in 2005 and has contributed greatly by increasing local tax revenues and creating employment.

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