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Is this sentence correct? I want to use this sentence before an oral exam, is this paragraph correct? Thank you all!!! It was during a short journey with my family that I paid a visit to a farm. It was a sunny day. When we arrived there, a sea of flowers made my eyes brighten up and lifted my spirits.

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It's actually a paragraph, as there are 3 sentences. But yes, the grammar seems fine to me. The only error was that you need 'a' before 'speaking exam', and it would be more natural to say 'an oral exam'
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It was during a short journey with my family that I paid a visit to a farm. It was a sunny day. When we arrived there, a sea of flowers made my eyes brighten up and lifted my spirits. - This is fine, however I think it could be better if you said "It was during a short journey with my family that I paid a visit to a farm, on a sunny day... " The reason being is that it's a bite repetitive to have two sentences starting with 'It was', otherwise it's nicely said and you've used some interesting expressions. :)

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