hello guys, could please check this for me?
Dear sir/madam

I am writing this letter in order to apply for consent to pursue my education in xxxxx, in your university
I am a graduate in petroleum engineering from Al-Baath University- Lebanon.
I decided to do Master because I personally believe that doing master would open doors to special high-tech research possibilities and enhance my Educational attainment and practical ability.
My major research interest includes XXXXXXX. Hence, I began to look for a well-known university XXXX with strong research background close to my interest
As sophisticated knowledge in this field is lacking at universities of my country, I prefer to continue my studies abroad.
My intense search for a reputable university led the German universities to be on the top of my list of preferences
Amongst all universities in Germany, I found XXXXXXX the best choice for me because of xxxxx.

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hello guys, could please check this for me?
Dear sir/madam

I am writing this letter in order to apply for consent to pursue my education in xxxxx, in your university 
I am a graduate in petroleum engineering from Al-Baath University- Lebanon.
I decided to do Master because I personally believe that doing master would open doors to special high-tech research possibilities and enhance my Educational attainment and practical ability.
My major research interest includes XXXXXXX. Hence, I began to look for a well-known university XXXX with strong research background close to my interest
As sophisticated knowledge in this field is lacking at universities of my country, I prefer to continue my studies abroad.
My intense search for a reputable university led the German universities to be on the top of my list of preferences 
Amongst all universities in Germany, I found XXXXXXX the best choice for me because of xxxxx.

Answer

Emarceen, it would be easier to correct if you posted it as a Notebook entry.

What are you applying for? A consent to study? Or a place at the University (=to be accepted). Unless you really need a consent to study (e.g. for immigration reasons), this is quite an unusual request in my experience.

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Here's is my suggestion:

I am writing this letter in order to apply my education in university xxx majoring xxx. I  graduate in petroleum engineering from Al-Baath University- Syria. I decided to take Master Degree because I do believe it would enhance my knowledge and ability to do research in high technology. I really like research, preferably about xxx. Hence, I began to look for a well-known university XXXX which I do believe that have strong research background close to my interest.

I firmly believe that I will be a good fit in university xxx's culture. I am excited at the prospect of master degree in this university upon my graduation and my resume for your review. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely, 
Your Name

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