could someone revise this sentence for me? Thank you so much!!
Under the context that the UK after Brexit is striving for its global development, and China under the “New Normal” is guiding the “One Belt One Road” framework, I believe that the Ten Trinity Square, this historic landmark building, will definitely serve as a key platform and bridge for economic and cultural exchange between East and West, making new contribution for deepening the China-UK relations during this “Gold Era”.”
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In the context of the UK's focus on global development after Brexit and China's “One Belt One Road” framework under the “New Normal”, I believe that Ten Trinity Square, a historic landmark building, will definitely serve as a key platform and bridge for economic and cultural exchange between East and West, deepening China-UK relations during this “Gold Era”.”
I had to move things around a little bit, but great job!
-"Golden Era" sounds more correct than "Gold Era" but if that's an established term, then go for it!
-"In the context of..." sounds more natural than "Under the context".
-"Making new contributions for deepening" sounds a bit off—you'd be fine with either half of it, just not both.
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