i want to get some fix by native people.
i translate language from korean to english.
but i'm not sure whether transaltion is right or not.

following thing is that i have translated few hours ago.

1.Shin Min A who walk up to the Red Carpet in wearing fancy black and gold clothes.
after wearing wided-pants and jump suit, she just drapt on to tuxedo and jump jacket on shoulder,for this reason
her sense of chic is exploded.
with the earing and gold baccelet , watch, etc, she reached climax of Red Carpet.
the clothes are all of Haider Ackermann

2.Ujeong looks beautiful when she wear suitable, girlish dress.
the pink dress in quit wrinkle make Ujeong more shiny here appearance.
around the dress, hanging flower.

3.Suzy transfer herself more boyish, bobbed-hair.
she shows up to Red Carpet wearing navy tube-top dress harmoned wiht chicy image.
the only thing that make simple dress to shine is Suzy sense.
from the waist, spreading the hem of a skirt is so dramatic.

thank you ㅠㅠ so long sentences.. but i need hlep !!
thank you

Question

i want to get some fix by native people.
i translate language from korean to english.
but i'm not sure whether transaltion is right or not.

following thing is that i have translated few hours ago.

1.Shin Min A who walk up to the Red Carpet in wearing fancy black and gold clothes.
after wearing wided-pants and jump suit, she just drapt on to tuxedo and jump jacket on shoulder,for this reason
her sense of chic is exploded.
with the earing and gold baccelet , watch, etc, she reached climax of Red Carpet.
the clothes are all of Haider Ackermann

2.Ujeong looks beautiful when she wear suitable, girlish dress. 
the pink dress in quit wrinkle make Ujeong more shiny here appearance. 
around the dress, hanging flower.

3.Suzy transfer herself more boyish, bobbed-hair.
she shows up to Red Carpet wearing navy tube-top dress harmoned wiht chicy image.
the only thing that make simple dress to shine is Suzy sense.
from the waist, spreading the hem of a skirt is so dramatic.

thank you ㅠㅠ so long sentences.. but i need hlep !!
thank you

Answer

You may not get the full help you need here but just as an example of what a challenge this is-

Shin Min A who walk up to the Red Carpet in wearing fancy black and gold clothes.

(possible correction) Shin Min walked onto the Red Carpet wearing a fancy black and gold outfit.

after wearing wided-pants and jump suit, she just drapt on to tuxedo and jump jacket on shoulder,for this reason

(possible correction) after donning wide pants and a jump suit, she draped a tuxedo and jump jacket over her shoulder (this sounds like too many clothes to be wearing all at once!)

her sense of chic is exploded.

(possible correction) her sense of chic is extraordinary.

with the earing and gold baccelet , watch, etc, she reached climax of Red Carpet.

(possible correction) with the added accessories of her earings, gold bracelet and watch she was the envy of the entire Red Carpet event.

the clothes are all of Haider Ackermann

(possible correction) her clothing is all by the designer Haider Ackermann.

Answer

Long, and a lot of work to correct...

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