The line graph illustrates the percentage of Internet users in 3 countries from 1999 to 2009. It can be clearly seen that the trend in the amount of the Internet users in each country increased over the period shown. Overall, Internet access in Canadia and USA was much higher than in Mexico. In 1999 , the percentage (proportion) of Internet users in USA was about 20% , which was the highest when compared to Canada and Mexico, with 15% and 10% respectively. In 2005, the figure for USA and Canada reached 70%, while Mexico only reached just over 25%. In 2009 , almost 100% used the Internet in Canada which was the highest, compared to 80% in USA and 30% in Mexico. I am not sure what you are writing. It would be normal to have a chart and then explain why this was happening. Just describing a chart is not normally necessary. I suspect you maybe at school?

The line graph illustrates the percentage of internet users in 3 countries from 1999 to 2009. It can be clearly seen that the trend in the amount of internet users in each country increased over period shown. Overall, the amount of Canadians and Americans who accessed the internet was much higher than that of Mexico. In 1999 , the percentage of internet users in the USA was about 20 %, which was the highest in comparison with Canada and Mexico with 15% and 10% respectively. In 2005, the figure for USA and Canada reached 70%, while Mexico just reached over 25%. In 2009, almost 100% people used the internet in Canada which was the highest, compared to 80% in the USA and 30% in Mexico Hi Vicky First of all, you may be better putting this in the notebook section as it easier to mark any changes there. However, I have made a few on the paragraph I pasted here. Overall, it is good. Think about the spacing with punctuation. No spaces before a comma or full stop and a space after. Is this for IELTS? if so, for task one it may be a little short and you would need to put it into paragraphs. Thanks Paul