Please help me to correct these sentences.
1].Few individuals opine that pictures could be used on TV and in newspapers to deliver clear information more effectively than it is described whole incidents.
2].Few individuals opine that it is likely to describe the behaviour, attitudes and social status of a person by judging the dresses which the person usually desire to wear.
3].To begin with, living an apartment is superior.
Without comparison, can we use the comparative adjective in a sentence as above?
4].One the other hand, it is necessary to ask if these benefits actually overweight the cost.
How to write this sentence in more formal way. I need to paraphrase "actually, ask"
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1].Few individuals opine that pictures could be used on TV and in newspapers to deliver clear information more effectively than it is described whole incidents.
In #1, something is missing or unclear after effectively. I'm not sure what you're trying to see after "effectively": what are whole incidents? Are you trying to compare visual with text descriptions?
2].Few individuals opine that it is likely to describe the behaviour, attitudes and social status of a person by judging the dresses which the person usually desire to wear.
In #2, who or what is "it" in the first part of the sentence? The general public?
Secondly, I would use the word "clothes" instead of "dresses." Dresses is not gender neutral, so it might be confusing.
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1) Few individuals have the opinion that images are a better resource for delivering clearer information on TV and newspapers than describing whole incidents.
2) Few (some) individuals opine that it is likely to describe the behavior, the attitudes and the social status of a person by judging the way they dress.
3) Yes, you may. But not with this one (superior)
To begin with, living in an apartment is superior to...
4) On the other hand, it is necessary to inquire/investigate if the benefits substantially/truly overweight the cost.
Hope it helps!
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That's hard one ! hahah
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