Please my English 2
Below is written about my work during study abroad.
I'm going to submit it to my supervisor because she must write a certification about my study.

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O The attendance basically biomechanics lecture
I attended the biomechanics lecture from July to December because I was interested how to learn sports biomechanics in other countries.
Biomechanics in sports science relats Physical education. In the same manner, it is applyed subject area from some basic study. I had known that It was common problem in New Zealand and Japan that some students don’t have enough basic educations from High school.
In the future, biomechanics study will be improved by technology. But it doesn't mean actual making progress. I should work by own thinking, and shouldn’t forget a enjoy the discoveries and new research. So I want to share the amazingness about the research, and importance of basic study, when I am in a position to teach.
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Please my English 2
Below is written about my work during study abroad.
I'm going to submit it to my supervisor because she must write a certification about my study.

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O The attendance basically biomechanics  lecture
     I attended the biomechanics lecture from July to December because I was interested how to learn sports biomechanics in other countries.
Biomechanics in sports science relats Physical education. In the same manner, it is applyed subject area from some basic study. I had known that It was common problem in New Zealand and Japan that some students don’t have enough basic educations from High school.
     In the future, biomechanics study will be improved by technology. But it doesn't mean actual making progress. I should work by own thinking, and shouldn’t forget a enjoy the discoveries and new research. So I want to share the amazingness about the research, and importance of basic study, when I am in a position to teach.
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Thanks Dreg and Darryl.
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I've amended your essay below, hope it expresses fully what you wish to achieve. I think what you meant by "basic study" is the "study of fundamentals"? Anyhow, I've added this big word in your essay. Hope you get what you wanted!

This section should actually be in the Notebook section, but anyhow.. if you want me to have a read at your English essay, write it in Notebook and privately message me. I'll have a look.

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"Attendance at the Biomechanics Lecture"

I attended the biomechanics lecture from July to December because I was interested about sports biomechanics in other countries.

Biomechanics in sports science is related to Physical Education. Because of this close relationship, we can apply the same basic studies to this subject. I understand from the lecture that it is a common problem in New Zealand and Japan, where students are not taught biomechanics during physical education in High school.

In the future, biomechanics study will be improved using technology. But it doesn't mean seeing progress immediately. I would work through my own approach, and be passionate in discovering new approaches and break new grounds in research. I want to share the amazing discoveries I have made during my research, and stress the importance of returning to the study of fundamentals, when I am in a position to teach.

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Attendance of Basic Biomechanics Lecture 
(1.) relats spelling is wrong, should be relates (2.) educations spelling is wrong, should be education (3.) No word "amazingness" so change "So I want to share the amazingness about the research" to "I want to share what I learned about the amazing research".

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