Is this sentence ok ? Does it sound natural ?
An experienced senior level network engineer with over 8 years of experience in routing and switching and wireless lan technologies. Focused on designing, implementing and supporting network projects as well as meeting client’s demands and develops good long-term customer relationships.

Thanks,

Everton

Question

Is this sentence ok ? Does it sound natural ?
An experienced senior level network engineer with over 8 years of experience in routing and switching and wireless lan technologies. Focused on designing, implementing and supporting network projects as well as meeting client’s demands and develops good long-term customer relationships.

Thanks,

Everton

Answer

The first sentence should only have one "and" if possible; if not, add commas to make it easier to read. Other suggestions below:

Experienced senior level network engineer with over 8 years of experience in routing and switching and wireless lan technologies. Focused on designing, implementing and supporting network projects, as well as meeting clients' demands and developing good long-term customer relationships.

Answer

Change develops to developing. The rest is fine and sounds pretty natural

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