别跟泄露他人秘密的人说你的秘密

没问题，非常好！

The answer is correct grammatically,but not in line with the logic of chinese in habits.Words are too cumbersome,and the meaning of the sentence is too complex,not clear enough. My English is not good ,I hope you can understand what I mean.[emoji]

你是对的哈哈，你也可以这样说：『不要跟把秘密说出去的人说你的秘密。』

Thanks so much