I have a English presentation.Please help me to correct it.Thank you very very much!!!This is the content:
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Study and education: Knowledge should be update regular. Read more books. The knack of success is that develop a new method or style of one's own. Exam-oriented education is wrong. The person who pursues the diploma only is stupid.

Love and kind-hearted: Love your motherland, be dutiful to your parents and respect everyone. Love is in all places. Sympathy is a virtue.

(Pictures)I like this set of books best, maybe it can be called fairy tales, but it look more like science fiction. This books are very interesting and imaginative. I like it very much! So I recommend you read it, the develop and ending of the story must be surprised you.

Although I say a lot, but I think you can’t feel Zheng Yuanjie’s magic words. So I hope everyone to read it. I believe you can get inspiration and happiness.

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I have a English presentation.Please help me to correct it.Thank you very very much!!!This is the content:
follow:http://www.italki.com/answers/question/37913-1-1-1.htm

Study and education: Knowledge should be update regular. Read more books. The knack of success is that develop a new method or style of one's own. Exam-oriented education is wrong. The person who pursues the diploma only is stupid.

Love and kind-hearted: Love your motherland, be dutiful to your parents and respect everyone. Love is in all places. Sympathy is a virtue.


(Pictures)I like this set of books best, maybe it can be called fairy tales, but it look more like science fiction. This books are very interesting and imaginative. I like it very much! So I recommend you read it, the develop and ending of the story must be surprised you.

Although I say a lot, but I think you can’t feel Zheng Yuanjie’s magic words. So I hope everyone to read it. I believe you can get inspiration and happiness.

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Study and education: Knowledge should be updated regularly. Read more books. The knack of success is to develop a new method or style of one's own. Exam-oriented education is wrong. The person who pursues the diploma only is stupid. 

Love and kind-hearted: Love your motherland.Be dutiful to your parents and respect everyone. Love is in all places. Sympathy is a virtue. 


(Pictures)I like this set of books best.Maybe it can be called fairy tales, but it looks more like science fiction. Thesse books are very interesting and imaginative. I like them very much! So I recommend you to read them. The plot  and ending of the story must be surprising. 

Although I said a lot,  I think you can't imagine Zheng Yuanjie's magic words. So I hope everyone to read his books. I believe you can get inspiration and happiness. 


PS:I corrected the grammars  and some sentences which aren't flowing.U need notice the differences between Chinese  and English interpunctions.Wish u success in ur presentation!

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The corrected version

Study and education: 
Knowledge should be updated regularly. Read more books. The knack of success is that one develops a new method or style of one's own. Exam-oriented education is wrong. The person who pursues the diploma only is stupid. 

Love and kind-heartedness: 
Love your motherland, be dutiful to your parents and respect everyone. Love is in all places. Sympathy is a virtue. 


Picture:
I like this set of books best, maybe it can be called fairy tales, but it looks more like science fiction. These books are very interesting and imaginative. I like them very much! So I recommend that you read them. The development and ending of the story must surprise you. 

Although I say a lot, I think you can’t feel Zheng Yuanjie’s magic words. So I hope everyone reads it. I believe you can get inspiration and happiness.

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