I have a English presentation.Please help me to correct it.Thank you very very much!!!This is the content:
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His fairy tales is not naive, and there are many philosophy of life. You must be get something if you read it though you are a adult。Mr.Zheng make his reader think about human, society and nature use his simple and imaginative words. He shows us a real world, he tells us the world has many bad things, although sometimes his words have a little extreme, but he really teaches us a lot of things:

Equality and self-confidence: Don’t compare with others at will, that will bother you.Everyone have good aspects, the parents should always encourage their children to develop their strengths, if so, everyone is genius.

Trueness and contentment: Never defiled by the social dirt. Don’t go after money, fame and gain. You should know the earth is a star for outer space, the richest man is a ant for the star. Insatiate person don’t know what is happy never.

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I have a English presentation.Please help me to correct it.Thank you very very much!!!This is the content:
follow:http://www.italki.com/answers/question/37911.htm

His fairy tales is not naive, and there are many philosophy of life. You must be get something if you read it though you are a adult。Mr.Zheng make his reader think about human, society and nature use his simple and imaginative words. He shows us a real world, he tells us the world has many bad things, although sometimes his words have a little extreme, but he really teaches us a lot of things:

Equality and self-confidence: Don’t compare with others at will, that will bother you.Everyone have good aspects, the parents should always encourage their children to develop their strengths, if so, everyone is genius.

Trueness and contentment: Never defiled by the social dirt. Don’t go after money, fame and gain. You should know the earth is a star for outer space, the richest man is a ant for the star. Insatiate person don’t know what is happy never.

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His fairy tales are not naive and contain many philosophies of life. There is always something to be gained by reading through it. Mr. Zheng makes his readers think about humans, society, and nature by his use of simple and imaginative words. He shows us the real world, tells us the world has many bad things and although his words are a little extreme sometimes, he really teaches us a lot of things:

Equality and self-confidence: Don’t compare yourself with others, it will always bother you. 
Everyone has good aspects, the parents should always encourage their children to develop their strengths. If so, they will succeed.

Trueness and contentment: Never defiled by the social dirt. Don’t go after money, fame and self-gain. You should know the earth is a star for outer space and the richest man is the ant for the star. Insatiate person don’t know what is happy never. (confused by this last sentence, sorry. and this paragraph could be re-worded better)

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