feature?
Is the sentence below unnatural?
An advertisement often contains features about a product, like how it can save our time, bring convenience, etc.
(I was trying to say that an advertisement contains information about the product and the information includes the features of the product.)

Question

feature?
Is the sentence below unnatural?
An advertisement often contains features about a product, like how it can save our time, bring convenience, etc. 
(I was trying to say that an advertisement contains information about the product and the information includes the features of the product.)

Answer

You can replace "like" with "such as".

You can say, An advertisement often describes features about a product, such as... (or, an advertisement often describes product features, such as...)

Remove "our" from "save our time" (too personal)

You can replace "bring" with provide

Just some suggestions!

Answer

I would say "An advertisement will often contain features..."  Otherwise it is well worded.

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