Is it correct?
If knowledge were a hill, the more knowledge you have, the higher is the hill, and the better is the view.
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Hi Hector - your sentence is good but it would read better if you avoided using the word 'is,' in the sentence:
If knowledge were a hill, the more knowledge one has, the higher the hill, and the better the view.
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Building on Andrew, I would add a "then" and drop a comma for flow.
"If knowledge were a hill, then the more knowledge one has, the higher the hill and the better the view."
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