Hi Leng. I made minimal changes because this is beautifully written even if the grammar is not exactly right. I do not want your words to get lost because this is meant to be an application for an opportunity to improve your English. It does not have to be perfect. It should not be perfect. Good luck to you! Dear Sir/Madam It is really a great honor to introduce myself to you. My name is Leng Hanxiao, I come from Xi'an International Studies University, majoring in marketing. Because of my enthusiasm for new knowledge, I went to college 3 years ago. Since then, I have been working hard and trying my best to grab every chance to improve myself, to make myself better and stronger, not just in the class, but in life. I’m open-minded and a bookworm, interested in English culture and literature, among which I am most interested in British literature. And for this reason, I chose English as my double major and insisted on studying English courses on weekends for the past three years, during which I studied Advanced English, Chinese English Translation, Survey of British History and Culture, Comprehensive English, Basic English Composition and so on. Although I have studied many basic English courses, I think, at present, that I can only read at a superficial level, and not be competent to think deeply and professionally owing to a lack of ample knowledge and ability. So I think that further study is still urgent for me. The major that I hope to pursue for my further education is British literature. I plan to concentrate my studies and research in this field during my graduate time. I hope that I can form a systematic view of Britain literature and achieve a solid foundation for future profession after three years study here. Finally, whether I’m qualified or not, I’ll take this application as my new starting point. Thank you!

I’m open-minded and a bookworm, interesting in English culture and literature, among which Britain literature the most. And out of this reason, I chose English as my double major and insisted on studying English courses on weekends for the past three years, during which I studied Advanced English, Chinese English Translation, Survey of British History and Culture, Comprehensive English, Basic English Composition and so on. Although I have studied many basic English courses, I think at present, I can only read in a superficial level, but not be competent to think deeply and professionally owing to lack of ample knowledge and ability. So I think further study is still urgent for me. The major that I hope pursue for my further education is Britain literature. I plan to concentrate on study and research in this field in my graduate time. I hope I can form a systematic view of Britain Literature and make a solid foundation for future profession after three years study here. Finally, whether I’m qualified or not, I’ll take this application as my new start point. Thank you!