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Please help me corect it better It was my trip with others good students in my father's company to Quy Nhon beach. I was a bit timid but they was very friendly so i quickly getting to know them. We play a minigames to choose the captain and it was me. I was a bit worry but i blame myself if i can't do i will aplogize all and give captain for others, anyway this is a good occasion for me to assert myself . I talked to every single, listen to them to know what are they strengths trait. After that, i made a working plan and show it to all, listen their opinions, eliminate some wrong points. With my ethusiasm and their cooperation, we supported each other to do well every things in my plan and end a memorable trip.

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I went on a trip to Quy Nhon beach with some students from my father's company. Although I was very timid, everyone was very friendly and I got to know them quickly. In order for us to choose a captain we played minigames, and I was chosen. I was concerned me being chosen but would blame myself if I didn't take the repsonsibiltiy . I thought of giving the position as captain over to someone else but instead I apologised beforehand as this was a good time to assert myself. I spoke to everyone and listened to see what their strengths were. After this I devised a good plan and showed it to them and listened to everyone's opinion and in the process eliminating the incorrect points. With my enthusiasm and their co-operation and the good support, my plan went very well and it turned out to be a very memorable trip.

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