"The middle of a sale" does the Grammar is okay?
Customer:Can you tell me how does the credit work?
We:Sure. You just need to have your ID,SSN and checking account.
Customer:Why do I have to provide you such information!?
We:That’s because the finance company don’t check your credit,at all. You might be in bankrupt and yet being approved.
Customer:Oh
We:Furthermore, you won’t have to go to any place to make the payments, because it is automatically,the finance company will withdraw the money monthly from your bank account.
Customer:Oh I see.
We: Would you like to see your results?It just take 1 minute.
Customer:Sure
We:Here you have an application.

Question

"The middle of a sale"  does the Grammar is okay?
Customer:Can you tell me how does the credit work?
We:Sure. You just need to have your ID,SSN and checking account.
Customer:Why do I have to  provide you such information!?
We:That’s because  the finance company  don’t check your credit,at all. You might be in bankrupt and yet  being approved.
Customer:Oh
We:Furthermore, you won’t have to go to any place to make the payments, because it is automatically,the finance company will withdraw the money monthly from your bank account.
Customer:Oh I see.
We: Would you like to see your results?It just take 1 minute.
Customer:Sure
We:Here you have an application.

Answer

Customer:Can you tell me how does the credit work?
We:Sure. You just need to have your ID,SSN and a checking account.
Customer:Why do I have to provide you with such information!?
We:That’s because the finance company doesn’t check your credit at all. You might be bankrupt and yet approved.
Customer:Oh
We:Furthermore, you won’t have to go to anywhere to make the payments, because it is automatic,the finance company will withdraw the money monthly from your bank account.
Customer:Oh, I see.
We: Would you like to see your results? It just takes 1 minute.
Customer:Sure
We:Here is your application.

Answer

Varonica is correct. I'm addressing your heading.

You said, "... does the grammar is okay?" No. "... is the grammar okay?"

Answer

We: That's because the finance company didn't check your credit at all. You might be bankrupt and not yet approved.
Customer: Oh
We: Furthermore, you won't have to go anywhere to make the payments, because it is automatic, the finance company will withdraw the money monthly from your bank account.
Customer: Oh I see.
We: Would you like to see your results? It just takes 1 minute.
Customer: Sure
We: Here is your application.

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