Hi Ahmed, I listened to the recording you made. I can give you these general comments - it's mostly your vowel sounds that you need to work on, particularly in the first half of the list. Also, the emphasis on "enjoying" is like this: en JOY ing. It's pretty difficult for me to give you more specific feedback in written form - if you were my student I would show you what shape your mouth and lips need to be in to form the correct vowel sounds, as well as help you to hear the difference between what you are saying and the correct pronunciation. In any case most of the words are pronounced pretty well! Are you a trying to have a British or American accent? Right now "glance" sounds more British than American. I hope this helps you. :)

Good job! It is better than we talk before. That'll be more perfect if u put more attention on your long and short sound.