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请问这个句子写得对吗?(尤其『融资』一词的用法) 该一行的几乎所有投资都来自台湾,而且只有约52%的投资融资生产LED照明产品的行业, 37%的投资融资LED芯片制造产业的发展。 谢谢!

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该一行几乎所有的投资都来自台湾,而且只有约52%的投资融资生产LED照明产品的行业,其余 37%的投资融资是LED芯片制造产业。 投资和融资尽量就写一个
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该行业的几乎所有投资都来自台湾,而且只有约52%的投资融资(用于)生产LED照明产品的行业, 37%的投资融资(用于)LED芯片制造产业的发展。 投资融资:可以缩写为:投融资。
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投资和融资两个词放在一起有点矛盾。 “该行的投资几乎都来自台湾,其中投资用于生产LED照明产品行业占52%, 投资LED芯片制造产业的发展占37%” 这样会不会更通顺一点?
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Hi, Shelly! Thank you for your correction, however I meant "only 52% of the investment are in A, and 37% are in B" So, would this be correct instead? 该一行的几乎所有投资都来自台湾,而且只有约52%在生产LED照明产品的行业的投资, 37%在 LED芯片制造产业的发展的投资。
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Hi, I proofread a little as below to make your sentences more fluent to the natives. 几乎该行的所有投资都来自台湾,而且對於生产LED照明产品的行业只有约52%的投资與(and)融资(here serve as two nouns - investment and financing), 37%的投资與融资在LED芯片制造产业的发展上。 Enjoy Chinese.

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