Which one is correct?
“To sum up, in order to address the shortcoming of online shopping, customers are supposed to be more cautious of the fake products and reviews. Meanwhile, it is high time that authorities concerned launched more strict laws and punishments about online shops who sell fake commodities. ”
If I can say:" customers are supposed to be more cautious to the fake products and reviews. ""Meanwhile, it is high time that authorities concerned should launch more strict laws and punishments about online shops who sell fake commodities."
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Answers · 2
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Grammar corrections:
- of fake products (no "the")
- that concerned authorities...
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The first one is fine it flows better.. However, you may want to change the following from the sentence below:
1. Authorities concerned to concerned authorities
2. more strict laws to stricter laws
"Meanwhile, it is high time that authorities concerned launched more strict laws and punishments about online shops who sell fake commodities. ”
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