I have considered various international universities offering courses of study in my chosen field and I have concluded that the curriculum offered at this university is the best match for my ambitions for my future studies. I am also drawn to this university because of the rich cultural traditions and history of the country where it is situated, the friendly and welcoming nature of its people and the strength of its education system. [It would be more natural English to name the country and university, etc., for instance:- I have looked at various universities throughout the world offering courses in psychology and I have concluded that the curriculum offered at Stanford is the best match for my ambitions for my future studies. I am also attracted to Stanford because of the rich cultural traditions and history of the USA, the friendly and welcoming nature of the American people and the strength of the American education system.]

thanks for your comment but sorry i didnt get exactlly that what would u want to teach me !! what did u mean about "put some effort into your work" and " show us your english skills" ???

Correct some of it yourself. Learn to capitalize "I", use punctuation, and spell the word "thanks". Put some effort into your work before you expect other people to do the same. Show us your English skills!

I have made a search on different international universities relating to my field of studies, and finally, I found that the curriculum of this university is the best . (for my future studies.) Besides that, the country where my unversity is located is rich in culture and history, with hospitable people and , now that I know, a strong education system.