May I provide clarification.... In scientific writing and/or writing research/survey papers, the term "survey" is to assess and cross examine. It is VERY appropriate and often used in scientific writing. So theoretically, you are corroborating data from research that has been conducted on the area of interest. Whatever resources you have chosen, this survey paper outlines your critical assessment of the topic which you specified. This survey paper is a contribution to the scientific community so you have chosen fine words that suit the audience. Example: I did a survey paper on the "Comorbidity of schizophrenia and eating disorders" which based on my findings on existing abstracts and clinical research conducted, there was a clear need to revisit diagnostic evaluation tools to address the ED criteria of schizophrenics that is often left untreated or overlooked. Again, you have surveyed the information and have drawn a conclusion from it. You are doing an amazing job!

I think the first one is a better start. Referencing the purpose of the paper at the beginning is very generic. Just a couple suggestions on the first option. Add "in which" between manner and children's. Also, writing has only one "t". Good luck with your paper!

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Also, I don't see introduction #1 but this one, I would reword the ending.... I believe you may be using a term incorrectly. But let me ask you, what do you mean by "bibliography on early literacy.....?" Are you meaning research on literacy?

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