Could you help with verb tenses in these sentences?
Here I want to talk about sonething in the past, but I am not sure if I wrote them correctly or not.. Please help me.

She inpired him to paint a picture in his mind that his situation was a battle and his white blood cells were his reliable soldiers who would fight strongly against his enemies which are his cancer cells. 2 weeks later, Ali had complete confidence in his mental ability and his heart was full of faith that he would get well soon.

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Could you help with verb tenses in these sentences?
Here I want to talk about sonething in the past, but I am not sure if I wrote them correctly or not.. Please help me.

She inpired him to paint a picture in his mind that his situation was a battle and his white blood cells were his reliable soldiers who would fight strongly against his enemies which are his cancer cells. 2 weeks later, Ali had complete confidence in his mental ability and his heart was full of faith that he would get well soon.

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She inpired him to paint a picture in his mind [as if] his situation was a battle and his white blood cells were his reliable soldiers who would fight strongly against [the enemy cancer cells]. 2 weeks later, Ali had complete confidence in his mental ability and his heart was full of [the] faith that he would get well soon.

Your past tense is great :) I just did some neatening with your expression - Good job, it sounds good ^^

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She inspired him to paint a picture in his mind. His situation was a battle and his white blood cells were his reliable soldiers who would strongly fight against his enemies, his cancer cells. 2 weeks later, Ali had complete confidence in his mental ability and his heart was full of faith that he would get well soon.

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