Is this sentence grammatically correct?
Hi,
could anyone tell me whether this sentence is grammatically correct? It is a thesis title, so I would like not to make any mistake before publishing it. Thanks to anyone who will help me.

"Leveraged Buyouts in the Private Equity industry: the role of debt and financial structure as drivers for the funds' investors value creation."

Question

Is this sentence grammatically correct?
Hi,
could anyone tell me whether this sentence is grammatically correct? It is a thesis title, so I would like not to make any mistake before publishing it. Thanks to anyone who will help me.

"Leveraged Buyouts in the Private Equity industry: the role of debt and financial structure as drivers for the funds' investors value creation."

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What about this?

Leveraged buyouts in the private equity industry: the roles of debt and financial structure as drivers for the creation of value for fund investors.

Capitalise either all nouns or just the first one.

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Leveraged Buyouts in the Private Equity Fund Industry : The Role of Debt and Financial Restructuring as the Drivers of Value Creation.

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The meaning is, to create value for the investors of the fund, not the fund itself.

I don't know if it's possible to use a double "possessive s" in the same sentence, like "the funds' investors' value creation" (meaning "value creation for the investors of the fund")

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I'm struggling a bit in here "the funds' investors value creation." are you trying to create value for the investor or the fund?

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