could you correct my mistakes?
Monitoring and evaluation of innovations in the design and management of sustainable innovation development based on the system of natural-science indicators of Russia and the Republic of Kazakhstan.
I've translated from Russian, is it right?here is the Russian text: Мониторинг и оценка новаций в проектировании и управлении устойчивым инновационным развитием на основе системы естественнонаучных индикаторов России и республики Казахстан.

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could you correct my mistakes?
Monitoring and evaluation of innovations in the design and management of sustainable innovation development based on the system of natural-science indicators of Russia and the Republic of Kazakhstan.
 I've translated from Russian, is it right?here is the Russian text: Мониторинг и оценка новаций в проектировании и управлении устойчивым инновационным развитием на основе системы естественнонаучных индикаторов России и республики Казахстан.

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Monitoring and evaluation of innovations in the design and management of sustainable innovation developments are based on the system of natural-science indicators of Russia and the Republic of Kazakhstan.

I'm not sure about the translation because you're English is better than my Russian. I think the only big thing you need is the verb to be (is or are). Without the verb to be there's no verb which means the sentence isn't complete. I'm guessing that since russian usually doesn't use the verb to be that's why this happened.

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