is this sentence right ?
I apologize for the late response and this financial issue, kindly find the credit note and the credit Memo attached which contains the extra discount.

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I apologize for the late response and this financial issue.  Kindly find attached the credit note and the credit memo, which contains the extra discount.

What contains the discount -- the note or the memo?  As written, the memo contains the discount.

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It's OK.  Full stop instead of comma.

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