Hey there! It's much easier to correct if you post this in your notebook! But I will try to help out here anyway. Michael Young was one of the most talented and influential sociologists in England. He was a man with a surprising combination of creative thought and practical activity (<although "practical activity" doesn't make sense. Can you try to describe what you're saying here so I can advise better?). However, for the general public, Young is rather famous as a Customers' Coalition founder, an organization which researches the quality range of consumer goods, from cars to razor blades. Young was born in Manchester in 1915. His father was an Australian violinist who later became a musical critic, and his mother was a teacher from Ireland. He lived in Australia until age 8, but he got an education in England, studying first in London, and then at Dartington Hall. While studying in school, he decided to become an architect and participated in a competition to design a cheap apartment home. Later, he decided to become a lawyer. He received a law degree, and although he never worked as a lawyer, his knowledge in law was enough to establish the Customers' Coalition.

Dmitry . this essay is not easy to correct here without changing a lot of your sentence structures . I suggest you post in in your notebook so we can correct it easier