inquiry if
Does this sound natural in a formal letter?

I am writing to inquiry if somebody of your staff has seen a red bag that I lost on train number 4.
If someone sees my bag, you can fins me in this number: 66689558 Don´t hesitate in calling me at any time.I will go immediately.

If not, please could I have it rephrased?

Thanks a lot

Question

inquiry if
Does this sound natural in a formal letter?

I am writing to inquiry if somebody of your staff has seen  a red bag that I lost on train number 4.
If someone sees my bag, you can fins me in this number: 66689558 Don´t hesitate in calling  me at any time.I will go immediately.

If not, please  could I have it rephrased?

Thanks  a lot

Answer

I am writing to inquire if anyone has found a red bag that I lost on Train 4.

If someone finds it,  please contact me at this number:  66689558. Do not hesitate to call at any hour.

Answer

I am writing to inquire if any of your staff has seen a red bag that belongs to me which I had lost while I was on the train No. 4.
If someone comes across the bag , please notify me at at this number  :  66689559.
Dont hesitate to call me at any time because I will go  and retrieve it as soon as It is  found.

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