Pretty good! I am not a professional English instructor but I am an educated person who's native language is English. Here are my thoughts: 1. Usually for small numbers (<10), numbers are written out. So you would say "seven years" instead of "7 years). The number cutoff at which you start using number instead of work depends on the style of writing you're using, but most styles agree for numbers less than 10. 2. After CIS states, rather than using a comma, I would use a connector word like "by". "The CIS states by advising..." 3. In this sentence "Our experience and understending of trends in the industry allows us to offer the most current investment decisions"... you should use allow (singular form of verb) instead of allows (pleural). Although you have two subjects in this sentence you would use the singular form because the two subjects are connected by "and", and the second subject (understanding) is a singular word. 4. "investment decisions" - "options" may be a better word than decisions (based on my understanding of what you're trying to say. 5. Misspellings: understanding, residents