would you correct this sentences?
I love this park. The sun is shining over my head and there are always slight breezes
After finding some shade places and I read books
If you were here, you would love it too.

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I love this park. The sun is shining down on my head ('The sun is shining down on me' is a more common sentence) and there is always a light breeze. After finding some shade (or, "after finding a shady spot"), I sit down to read my book. If you were here, you would love it too.

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