Can someone fix this sentence please?
I really hate your stories about your life, because it makes me think that my life sucks.
Search from various English teachers...
Answers · 8
2
It doesn't need to be fixed. It is colloquial language but grammatical.
1
I really hate the stories about your life, they make me feel like my life sucks.
0
I really hate your life's stories which make me think mine sucks.
0
Thanks. So, the final version is 'I really hate hearing the stories about your life because they make me feel like my own life sucks'...
0
Grammatically, it is incorrect.
There should not be a comma after "life."
You could edit this sentence to make it sound "better." But its not necessarily needed.
"because" is a transition word and in your case, you do not need a comma.
Still haven’t found your answers?
Write down your questions and let the native speakers help you!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
