Feedback on official letter in Croatian
I am trying to write an official letter in Croatian. It is for the reimbursement of a small amount of money but I decided to make it into a practice. Does anyone want to take a look at this last part? I wonder if I expressed myself well. That is doesn't sound rude or weird?
''Nadam se da sam dala sve potrebne informacije za povrat novca. Ako je informacija nedostaje molim vas nazovite me na ----- da vam mogu dati sto još trebate.
Hvala unaprijed za pomoć.''
Thank you
Greetings, Hanneke
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Here's how I would express it:
"Nadam se da sam Vam dala sve potrebne informacije za povrat novca. Ako nedostaje neka informacija molim Vas, nazovite me na ----- da vam ih mogu dati."
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Thank you Ivana, that's very helpfull.
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Nadam se da sam dala sve potrebne informacije za povracaj novca. Ako koja informacija nedostaje, molim vas, nazovite me na ----- da vam mogu reći sto još trebate/kako bih vam mogla reći što još trebate.
Hvala unaprijed na pomoći./Unapred zahvalna na pomoći.
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