Are the sentenses correct?
Please correct the sentenses more nutural in English.
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Entry Requirements
・An applicant who passed the JLPT (at least 4th level) and has a student visa.
・An applicant who has completed 12 years educational curriculum and should be under 28 years old.
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My question is that which one is better to say 'An applicant' or 'Applicants'?
Should I say '12 years of educational curriculum'?

Thank you!

Question

Are the sentenses correct?
Please correct the sentenses more nutural in English.
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Entry Requirements
・An applicant who passed the JLPT (at least 4th level) and has a student visa. 
・An applicant who has completed 12 years educational curriculum and should be under 28 years old.
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My question is that which one is better to say 'An applicant' or 'Applicants'?
Should I say '12 years of educational curriculum'?

Thank you!

Answer

Since they're entry requirements, I'd rewrite as:

"Applicants must have passed the JLPT (with at least 4th level)..."
"Applicants must have completed 12 years...and *must be* under 28 years old"

*should be* is more like an expectation, not a requirement, so to specify an age requirement, it's better to say "must be under 28"

Also, I understand "12 years of educational curriculum" to mean that they would be equivalent to having graduated from high school here in the US. If that's the case, then it's fine.

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