please help me to improve this sentence, thank you!
Over exploiting these natural and historical resources has changed their original appearance, and ever-increasing visitors are beyond their capacity of reception.
please tell me if this sentence is correct?
And how to make it more natural?
should I use plural of appearance?
Thank you!
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Answers · 6
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I would hyphenate Over-exploiting.
You probably need 'numbers' after 'visitors' - otherwise you might be saying that the visitors are getting fatter! "
beyond their capacity of reception" is very odd. What capacity are you talking about?
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OVEREXPLOITING these natural and historical resources has changed their original appearance, and THE ever-increasing visitors are beyond their capacity of reception.
Other than those, it looks pretty good to me...
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