How to make this sentence shorter? How to improve it ? I had also participated in the 2013 International Sunshine Camp in my summer vacation, where elite students from the United States, Singapore, Excellence 9, etc. were gathered completing tasks and set up discussions concerning trust, integrity, career planning, and servant leadership.Ok, this is the whole paragraph,which I was working on. I'd like to improve on this one. Any suggestions? "With a can-do attitude and excellent practical ability, I have been involved in a wide range of extracurricular activities outside academic pursuits. Because of my strong capability and high efficiency in task handling, I was designated as a single delegate in the HRC in the National Model United Nations (NMUN). On the 5th China-Japan-Korea (CJK) Youth Forum, I was endorsed as a key-note presenter on behalf of all the Chinese students for my thorough analysis and understanding of the topics. The 2013 Sunshine International Camp was also a great chance for me to discuss topics and complete tasks concerning trust, integrity, and servant leadership with elite students from the United States, Singapore, Excellence 9, etc. Through these experiences, my communication skills and analytical thinking were greatly tempered.