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It is a known fact that the earth is suffering from economic crisis. At present, the fuel is expensive and expected to increase the near future. Since not all costumers can afford to buy fuel, the researchers find a way to have a substitute fuel.
This study aims to answer the following questions:
1. Does the cleaner used oil be more effective than the over-used cooking oil?
2. Will it be possible that the fuel won’t work sometimes?
3. Is there any possibility that the product can cause damages to the engine?
The significance of the study is to produce a fuel out from a used cooking oil, that could lead to a production of an inexpensive fuel and can provide entrepreneurs with a new source of income by utilizing the used cooking oil in fuel production which could be sell to the customers.
The study would only test the used cooking oil if it is an alternative source as a fuel. The study does not include the kind of cooking oil is the most effective one.
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It is a known fact that the earth is suffering from economic crisis. At present, the fuel is expensive and expected to increase IN the near future. Since not all costumers can afford to buy fuel, the researchers TRY TO find a way to have a substitute fuel.
This study aims to answer the following questions:
1. Does the cleaner used oil be more effective than the over-used cooking oil?
2. Will it be possible that the fuel won’t work sometimes?
3. Is there any possibility that the product can cause damages to the engine?
The significance of the study is to produce a fuel out from (a) (OMMIT) used cooking oil, that could lead to a production of an inexpensive fuel and can provide entrepreneurs with a new source of income by utilizing the used cooking oil in fuel production which could be SOLD to the customers.
The study would only test the used cooking oil if it is an alternative source as a fuel. The study does not include the kind of cooking oil AS the most effective one.
P.S. Overall, it's a very well written piece of text!!! Congratulations!!!
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