Hi Jana, you could try posting your story as a notebook entry, this area is for answering specific language or cultural questions :) Also, you might get more of a response from people if you said something like "Would anyone like/be able to help me?" instead of "who gonna help me?" for one the English you used in that sentence is very slack, and two, it can come across as a tad rude and demanding depending how you read it. Good luck with your story.