My English line
A lonely man
There were so many tears in his eyes
I wiped them easily and said "No need to cry"
He turned around to the sky
He wished he could just run away and fly
No one is cared in the world
Your rage is in inside
No one is safe without sword
We're kinda deaf and blind.
He wanted back but doors were closed
No one could hear his pleads
He felt as if he's deep in frost
But pain was strongly deep
One day he died, relieved his soul
No need to bear the pain
He used to be a happy man
Who'll never come again...
Please don't judge so strictly, I have a pretty bad mood so I wrote this.. Don't know why, just had an inspiration. Please write what you think about it..Thank you..
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Answers · 5
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Марина, I liked it very much:) I can't correct anything since your English is better than mine. But I liked the plot, it looks accomplished and a reader could be satisfied. Espesially I liked the final chord "He used to be a happy man, Who'll never come again..." - sometimes it's really true, unfortunatelly...
Best wishes
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