Is the translation grammatically correct?Does it sound natural?
Well it's a Chinese poem which was translated into English by someone on the Internet. Is the translation correct?
Passion for Life
Wang Guozhen
I care not whether I can achieve
For the longed goal
I shall despite wind and rain go
I care not whether I can get the bliss of love
For the lost heart to rose
I shall with courage propose
I care not whether I will suffer chill and cold
For the dreamed horizontal mind
I shall leave my back figure behind
I care not whether I will face rain or shine
With to life my devotion
Everything will come as expectation
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Answers · 4
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There are several parts that are incorrect/do not sound good in English.Post it where I can make corrections and I can help you.
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No , it's have a lots of incorrect parts
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