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Please correct these sentences 1. My daddy spread the bees. The bees deposit honey in the beehives. 2. Ann expresses her mercy and compassion by looking after seniors in the hospital. 3. Children played hide-and-seek and John roamed in the garden trying to find out his friends. 4. Her boss simplified her work, because she is expecting a baby. 5. He made a solid solution to fire an old letter from his ex-girlfriend, because the past shouldn't bring harm to the present. 6. I feel a distinctive smell of smoke, maybe somebody ignited a fireplace. 7. If we make remount we will find an application to that tools. 8. I had gone to dance class before I felt a pain in my leg flexing it. 9. Look, the shelves are empty because it is a shortage of buckwheat in the current period. 10. I hope I will love my spouse when he will be senior.

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To what level do you want them corrected? There are not any obvious errors, but the language is 'odd'. Sometimes (e.g. 7) it is so odd that the meaning is unclear. Making them more natural would involve changing the odd word choices. Is that what you want?
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3. ...trying to find his friends. 5. ...to burn an old letter... 6. I notice/smell.... 7. (I don't know what you are trying to say here) 8. ... pain in my leg while flexing it/ pain in my leg when I flex it 9. ... because there is a shortage of buckwheat right now. 10. I hope I will love my spouse/husband when he is a senior/when he gets old

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