Can someone correct the mistakes if there's any?
Living without a smartphone.

A lot of people have a smartphone, in fact probably more than one, and people spend hours to using it. But a few of them can live without a smartphone because they don't imagine how it would be. I want to tell you some advantages and disadvantages.

The first advantages is, you can spend more time talk to each people instead to use social network. Secondly, you have more time doing more creative things like reading or painting. Thirdly, you can have more time outdoor, and it would be more fit.

But on the other hand, there are also disadvantages. For example, you are lost and you can't using GPS, or sometimes you need to check you email. Also it not true that to using smartphone. There are good ones, like people who live so far can talk to each other for long distance.

In conclusion, although living without a smartphone has some advantages, I thing today it's unrealistic and that we should just try to using the smartphone only to call and sms..

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Can someone correct the mistakes if there's any?
Living without a smartphone.

A lot of people have a smartphone, in fact probably more than one, and people spend hours to using it. But a few of them can live without a smartphone because they don't imagine how it would be. I want to tell you some advantages and disadvantages.

The first advantages is, you can spend more time talk to each people instead to use social network. Secondly, you have more time doing more creative things like reading or painting. Thirdly, you can have more time outdoor, and it would be more fit.

But on the other hand, there are also disadvantages. For example, you are lost and you can't using GPS, or sometimes you need to check you email. Also it not true that to using smartphone. There are good ones, like people who live so far can talk to each other for long distance.

In conclusion, although living without a smartphone has some advantages, I thing today it's unrealistic and that we should just try to using the smartphone only to call and sms..

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(I'm not sure if I changed the meaning of your final sentence or if that's what you meant to say)

Living without a smartphone.

A lot of people have smartphones, in fact probably more than one, and they spend hours using it.  Few of them can live without a smartphone and they can’t imagine how it would be. I want to tell you some advantages and disadvantages of living without a smartphone.

The first advantage would be that you can spend more time talking to each other instead of using social networks. Secondly, you have more time doing more creative things like reading or painting. Thirdly, you can have more time outdoors, and you would be more fit.

On the other hand, there are disadvantages. For example, what if you are lost and you can't use a GPS, or if you need to check your email?  Another disadvantage to not having a smartphone would be the inability to talk with people who live a long distance from you.

In conclusion, although living without a smartphone has some advantages, I think today it's unrealistic to think we should just use the smartphone to call and sms.

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Post this in 'Notebook' as it's easier to correct it there.

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