Help with a poem
I have been trying hard with the help of others to figure out the words of an audio poem. The Youtube link for this 2-minute long poem is given below.
Here is what we've come up with:
[ start correction/addition from here] Her smile is like the light (maybe: on the dark side of the moon).
Her presence is like gravity.
The thought of her makes time stand still.
And knowing if i'll see her again, it's like the tears of an angel.
But her memory's like a feena about to get us fixed.
Her body is like the waves in occean, but its temptation's like the shark....
When those of her know i'm immune, those- those're like a vaccination I didn't ask for.
The doctor was like a broken heart, so it's not how i felt...
Kindly correct the mistakes (if any), and complete the missing words.
Your help is highly appreciated. Thank you.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=j3OMxXYocRMThe above link contains spaces. Here is the correct link without spaces:

https://youtube.com/watch?v=j3OMxXYocRM

Question

Help with a poem
I have been trying hard with the help of others to figure out the words of an audio poem. The Youtube link for this 2-minute long poem is given below. 
Here is what we've come up with:
[ start correction/addition from here] Her smile is like the light (maybe: on the dark side of the moon).
Her presence is like gravity.
The thought of her makes time stand still.
And knowing if i'll see her again, it's like the tears of an angel.
But her memory's like a feena about to get us fixed.
Her body is like the waves in occean, but its temptation's like the shark....
When those of her know i'm immune, those- those're like a vaccination I didn't ask for.
The doctor was like a broken heart, so it's not how i felt...
Kindly correct the mistakes (if any), and complete the missing words. 
Your help is highly appreciated. Thank you.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=j3OMxXYocRMThe above link contains spaces. Here is the correct link without spaces:

https://youtube.com/watch?v=j3OMxXYocRM

Answer

Hi this is what I heard when I listened to it, it looks like you might have missed the first few lines so that's why my version starts differently to yours. There's one word I couldn't understand which is marked as (????) But hopefully this helps.

She's like goosebumps,
She's like the icicles of a whisper on a cold October night
She's like the spark between two swords clashing
She's like the kiss of a winning battle
She could be the armor, to a knight
and the blood of an open wound
Her eyes are as warm as a sun out of the sun
Her smile is like the light on the dark side of the moon
Her presence is like gravity
The thought of her makes time stand still
Not knowing if I'll see her again is like the tears of an angel
But her memory is like a (????) about to get it's a fix
Her body is like the waves on the ocean
But her temptation is like the sharks that lay beneath
One dose of her and now I am immune
It's like a, like a vaccination I didn't ask for
The doctor was like a broken harp the song to silence how I felt,
But now I'll never love another and it's refreshing
'cause her beauty is love itself
I'd say no one compares
But, that's not the right words
She is in a category all her own
She's like the icicles of a whisper on a cold October night
She's like Goosebumps.

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