Are there any mistakes in these sentences^^
I saw this on a package of AAA brand ( which i won't mention)
I feel that there are some mistakes in those sentences below.

" AAA selected "whole grain brown rice" from organic farmer community.
Whole grain still has germ and bran which is rich of vitamin and various natural elements. Mushroom and carrot are in congee for fulfill benefit, adjust flavor by sauce powder sachet inside the package.
Let's take care the world....Let's support organic. "

I just want to know if there are some mistakes so, i can learn from them.

Since i'm not a native English speaker, i can't point out exactly how they are wrong.
Could anyone help me here?
Thank you ^^These are what i think. Please, tell me if i am wrong^^
1.AAA selected "whole grain brown rice" from organic farmer community.
-selected - selects
-organic farmer community- organic farming community

2.Whole grain still has germ and bran which is rich of vitamin and various natural elements.
-which is-which are
-vitamin- vitamins/

3. Mushroom and carrot are in congee for fulfill benefit, adjust flavor by sauce powder sachet inside the package.
- fulfill benefit -fulfilling benefit
-Adjust favor- i don't know???
-,adjust flavor by sauce powder sachet inside the package. I think this is an independent clause. "and" should be added before adjust...
or maybeseperate 3. into 2 sentences -Mushroom____. Adjust____.

4. Let's take care the world....Let's support organic. "
Let's take care the world -Let's take care of the world.
-sopport organic- Isn't organic an adj. ?

Question

Are there any mistakes in these  sentences^^
I saw this on a package of AAA brand ( which i won't mention)
I feel that there are some mistakes in those sentences below. 
 
" AAA selected "whole grain brown rice" from organic farmer community.
Whole grain still has germ and bran which is rich of vitamin and various natural elements. Mushroom and carrot are in congee for fulfill benefit, adjust flavor by sauce powder sachet inside the package.
Let's take care the world....Let's support organic. "

I just want to know if there are some mistakes so, i can learn from them.

Since i'm not a native English speaker, i can't point out exactly how they are wrong.
Could anyone help me here?
Thank you ^^These are what i think. Please, tell me if i am wrong^^ 
1.AAA selected "whole grain brown rice" from organic farmer community. 
-selected -> selects
-organic farmer community-> organic farming community

2.Whole grain still has germ and bran which is rich of vitamin and various natural elements. 
-which is->which are
-vitamin-> vitamins/

3. Mushroom and carrot are in congee for fulfill benefit, adjust flavor by sauce powder sachet inside the package.
- fulfill benefit ->fulfilling benefit
-Adjust favor-> i don't know???
-,adjust flavor by sauce powder sachet inside the package. I think this is an independent clause. "and" should be added before adjust...
or maybeseperate 3. into 2 sentences ->Mushroom____. Adjust____.

4. Let's take care the world....Let's support organic. "
Let's take care the world ->Let's take care of the world.
-sopport organic-> Isn't organic an adj. ?

Answer

Hi Kay,

This looks like someone has used Google Translator!

1) You are correct - it should be 'organic farming community'

2) Should be 'which are rich in vitamins'

3) Is a bit confusing! I would write 'Mushroom and carrot are in the congee for fulfilment benefits, adjust the flavour by adding the sauce powder sachet inside the package.

4)'Let's take care of the world....Let's support organic.' Organic can be used as a noun in this context.

Best of luck!

Lee

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