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Inevitably, each year, I get cold. It can happen no matter when (november, december, january, february or march), I know it will happen. Then I quickly make an appointment with my doctor who must prescribe me a medical treatment.
In this prescription, there's a medicine I'm really fond of: COUGH SYRUP. I just love that! It is full of sugar and very tasty. It's like a present the doctor gives me. I would almost especially get cold to have it!

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Can you correct this text?
Inevitably, each year, I get cold. It can happen no matter when (november, december, january, february or march), I know it will happen. Then I quickly make an appointment with my doctor who must prescribe me a medical treatment. 
In this prescription, there's a medicine I'm really fond of: COUGH SYRUP. I just love that! It is full of sugar and very tasty. It's like a present the doctor gives me. I would almost especially get cold to have it!

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Inevitably, each year, I get a cold. It can happen no matter when (November, December, January, February or March), I know it will happen. Then I quickly make an appointment with my doctor who prescribes me some medicine.
In this prescription, there's a medicine I'm really fond of: COUGH SYRUP. I just love it! It is full of sugar and very tasty. It's like a present the doctor gives me. I would almost catch a cold on purpose just to get it!

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Muchas gracias por el cumplido Daniel

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Very good!  The only change is to add "a" before cold.  You get "a cold".  "A cold" is a sickness, while cold is temperature as in frio.

Very impressive!

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